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I decided to do something fun, but I need critique opinion on relative size of things/composition/perspective.

Any input is welcome and encouraged. Things feel off/not right and I need to fix them.

My objective here was to create a cute scene of friends having fun creating a cute picture with lots of things going on, but I still want to have a focal point in the picture and not have it feel cluttered if possible.

Go wild with suggestions!
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Proportion looks good, the cartoon theme is absolutely adorable =D, I might try to fade out the background just a little to help shift attention to the foreground.
The only thing I might change other than that is perhaps to shrink down your flying bird's legs just a tad... but again since it's a cartoon that isn't as important.

Very fun piece Pete, made me smile after a really long day! =)